Practice IOC

AC's Practice IOC

my recording:

will not load to save my life (emailed to Mrs. G)

my annotated passage from The Handmaid's Tale:

How I would score myself:

Criterion A: Knowledge and understanding of the text or extract- 4  

My knowledge of the text is good, but my comments are only "occasionally" supported by references to the text.

Criterion B: Understanding of the use and effects of literary features- 6

I think this could possibly be a 7, but I'm not positive enough to bump myself up to the next mark range. I related back to Atwood's purpose well and addressed the three stylistic features' effects on her audience with "adequate" (almost "good") understanding.

Criterion C: Organization- 3

I think my commentary follows my intended structure well and is "generally coherent." I did an introduction (which should have been shorter), then focused in on three stylistic features, then concluded briefly.

Criterion D: Language- 2

The language that I use is definitely not my best.  My sentence structure and grammar is "generally accurate," with errors that are "apparent." I also use too many filler words such as "um," "uh," and "so." I can improve on this maybe by writing down some sophisticated transition words during my 20 minute planning period.

Total Score: 15/30

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Storytelling and Fear

Click here to watch "What Fear Can Teach Us."

TedTalk by Karen Thompson Walker

filmed June 2012

The TedTalk, "What Fear Can Teach Us," by author Karen Thompson Walker, is an inspiring and fascinating account of what fears are and what they mean.

In her talk, Walker uses the tale of the Essex shipmen to support her message. Though each part of the story is revealed at various points during her talk, its entirety is as follows. A 19th century sailors' ship was partially destroyed by a sperm whale, and thousands of miles away from home and the nearest land, they had limited supplies. They came up with three options on how to proceed: 

             1. The Marquesas Islands that were about 1200 miles away. However, they heard                                      horrifying rumors that it was full of cannibals; they imagined themselves reaching land                        only to promptly be eaten.

             2. Hawaii. However, they feared that there would be stormy weather there.

             3. Coast of South America. Though this option reaped the best rewards, the journey to get                        there would be perilous. The length would wipe out their food and water                                                supplies.

These sailors were faced with choosing how to proceed based on their fears of each option. Their fears dictated that they could either be eaten by cannibals, be wiped out by storms, or try to reach land while diminishing all of their supplies.

Walker uses this story to show the link between fear and imagination. She talks about juvenile fears being based off of a "vivid imagination" that creates scary scenarios in our minds. 

Thus fears are stories, according to Walker. They are unintentional, yet innate within us and our imaginations. Like stories, fears have characters, plots, imagery, and suspense. The latter rises "What if?" and "What will happen next?" questions. With both storytelling and fear, we want answers to these questions; we want to know what is going to happen to the main character. Walker reveals that these questions are answered in the form of stories rooted in fear. Our fear of the unknown lead us to do "mental time travel" to create tales about what the future may look like.   

Walker continues by arguing that some fears can actually predict our future. But this raises another question: how do we distinguish between fears that do and those that don't?

Well, we can "read" our fears. Fears that are more artistic and vivid typically prove to be over-dramatic and unlikely. Ones that are less violent and developed through a scientific lens are usually more probable, gradual, and dangerous.

Walker's purpose with this talk is to encourage the audience to start "reading" our fears. She encourages us to listen to our more subtle, gradual fears rather than our more horrifying, imaginative ones so that we are swayed less often by the latter ones. 

In order to get this point across, Walker uses repetition, ethos, and pathos. She frequently repeats questions of "what if" and "what would happen" to show the audience that our imaginations can create most terrifying stories/fears based on these questions. In effect, the talk becomes more meaningful to the audience because they can relate to it. The more meaningful and inspiring a presentation is, the more likely its audience is to take what they have learned and implement it into their own lives.

Walker uses ethos to prove her credibility as an author of fiction. She tells the audience of her experience in writing her first novel, The Age of Miracles. During this process, she thought deeply about "what would happen if the rotation of the Earth suddenly began to slow down." She shows her audience that she is experienced in "reading" fears; she is trustworthy because she has implemented this practice in her life and work, and it has been successful.

Walker also incorporates pathos in her presentation by obvious reasons of appealing to each audience member's fears. She recognizes the need for controlling our fears and provides a way to do it. By relating our fears to stories, she diminishes the reality of them, which convinces the audience to "read" their own fears to figure out which ones they should really be worried about.

I chose this TedTalk because I can relate to the fear of the future, and I am definitely guilty of making up scary stories about what it might look like. I often ask myself the questions, "What if?" and "What would happen?" Currently, this revolves around college, as I'm sure it does for many of my peers. What if I don't get into my top choice? What would I do? What if I get in but can't afford it?

Now, after watching the talk, I have a way to better deal with fear of the unknown. I plan to "read" my fears and determine which stories are ridiculous and which are possible.

This presentation connects to what we will be covering in the next unit, as fear is a significant force of human nature. 

Without fear, are we truly human?

Whipped Walter

Walter Neff certainly fits the archetype of the male lead in film noir. He was weak in falling for Phyllis, or "Baby," as he liked to call her. In the frustrated sense, I struggled at first with how he fit into that characteristic. I then found that there is more than one connotation of the word, and Walter was frustrated in that he was "prevented from progressing, succeeding, or being fulfilled" (Google). 

His failure to succeed with his and Phyllis' plan and to progress in his life spurred from his personal characteristics. As I watched the movie, I recorded many adjectives to describe him, including flirtatious, sarcastic, and naive. The latter is the trait that ultimately leads to his downfall.

Walter's naivety was what brought him into Phyllis' trap. He was caught up in being his flirtatious and sensual self that he was easily, unknowingly tempted into a cunning and ambitious plan to kill Mr. Dietrichson. Once he had agreed to that, there was no going back. That initial interaction in the Dietrichson living room set the standard for the rest of the film. Walter was completely taken away with her beauty and helplessness with her "abusive" husband. From that point on, he was going to help her, and he certainly went to great measures to allow her to get her way. 

This situation is evidence for what his relationships were like with women. He was what we would refer to as "whipped" today. He was easily tempted by beautiful women, and this characteristic led him to some crazy actions. When he came across both Phyllis and Lola, he was quickly drawn into their issues and offered his manly assistance. With Phyllis it was the major plot to kill her husband for money, and with Lola it was her problems with Nino. He liked to chase women, complete with their problems and emotions and all, to fulfill his pleasure-seeking senses. Being too caught up in desire led him on a dangerous, doomed pathway.

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Despite his personality traits that ultimately led him to make rash decisions, Walter was also sarcastic and clever. At the end of the movie, he mocks Phyllis by asking her "Why don't you shoot again, Baby," (see in video below) because he knows she won't have the guts to do it from a shorter distance. At this point, we see Walter's naivety turn into a sort of contempt. As a male, he didn't like being manipulated by a woman, and he made sure to express and play that up in the conversation that he had with Phyllis before he shot her. 

Continue Watching for Banquo

The Breakfast Club

This movie is the story of a day in Saturday detention for five students: a rebel/criminal, a princess, an outcast, a nerd, and a jock/athlete. Although these students come from "different walks of life," they tell their individual stories, and everyone starts to see each in a different, more positive way. At the end of the movie, detention is over, and the five students get into their respective parents' cars. During the fade out, the rebel/criminal walks across the football field to the song of "Don't You (Forget About Me)."

Banquo would recommend this movie mainly for the final famous song, as he ensures that Macbeth will not forget about him and what he did when his ghost haunts Macbeth during the banquet scene. Also, Banquo would appreciate the message that there is more to people besides stereotypes and what you see on the outside (i.e. Macbeth isn't actually a trustworthy leader). This relates to the motif of appearance vs. reality in the play.

Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban

The third movie in the Harry Potter series follows Harry, Ron, and Hermione at Hogwarts, but it also covers the mysterious character of Sirius Black, who is held responsible for the assisting with the murder of Harry's parents. We learn at the end, though, that it was never him after all; instead, it was Peter Pettigrew, and unfortunately, he escapes.

Banquo would most likely love all Harry Potter movies because of the supernatural, but he would recommend this one in particular because of Professor Trelawney's prophecy. Trelawney, the divination teacher, makes the prophecy that Peter will break free and reunite with Lord Voldemort. However, when Harry hears this, he assumes that she means Sirius.

Banquo would feel a personal connection to this prophecy scene, for it was the three witches' prophecy that ultimately led to his own murder. He would recommend this movie to send the message that witches' prophecies end up becoming true through action and that you have to listen to them closely to understand.

Any Disney show

Disney shows are intended for a young audience, so each one's content is clean and familial. For example, episodes of The Wiggles contain healthy life lessons such as nutrition. They made lots of songs about what a healthy lifestyle looks like, and my favorite when I was little was the "Fruit Salad" song (see below).

Banquo would love the down-home, clean Disney shows with positive messages and without displays of negative character traits and/or actions. Throughout the play, Banquo's character is brave and ambitious, yet he does not commit murder to fulfill the prophecy like Macbeth does. In Disney words, Banquo is the "good guy," while Macbeth is the "bad guy." Banquo would want to send out the message to the young "bad guys" that doing the right thing and making good life choices, like he did, is important.

Brain Games, "Morality"

This particular episode of the series Brain Games focuses on morality and where it comes from. Does it come from the brain or from society's expectations? It provides trials for the viewer that "test the strength of moral fiber." The episode reveals in the end that the outside world has great influence on one's morality.

Banquo would recommend this episode because of the message it would send to Macbeth and others similar to Macbeth. He would challenge Macbeth's actions as immoral, while he would consider his own decisions in the play to be moral. He would also want to try to understand why Macbeth did what he did, and exploring how the human mind functions is a good way to start. Banquo would apply the episode's claim that the outside world influences morality to Macbeth decisions. With that, the prophecy, desire for power, and Lady Macbeth all play a role in Macbeth's choices.

http://www.sparknotes.com/shakespeare/macbeth/characters.html
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0088847/synopsis
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g2cUscfxfiE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gB4MNu6W9sg
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt4430376/plotsummary?ref_=tt_ov_pl
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XhKOAH3Kn3k

Lights, camera, ACTION, Macbeth

Chaucer-like disclaimer: I am taking a risk at the beginning of this post when I briefly reveal a few personal items.

When I was going through a tough time in my life when my parents divorced, I became a fairly spiritual person. With the help of various supporters, I learned to accept the drastic life changes that were occurring and that they were happening for a reason.  I grew to know that this was a part of God's plan for me; He was teaching me early on that life isn't easy.  

With that being said, I believe that the events in my life are in accordance to God's plan for me. However, I also think that I am in control of my actions.  I am the one who decides how to handle each situation that I come across.  As an example, I was the one who made decisions about how to split time between my parents during that difficult time.

Even though I believe in God's "fate," or plan,  Shakespeare did not; it can be seen through his play, Macbeth, that he believed that people are in complete control of their actions.  Through this text, Shakespeare demonstrates his view that fate plays little to no role in life events.  He argues through the character of Macbeth that actions are choices that have substantial effects on the future.

When Macbeth receives the prophecy from the three witches, his actions, not fate, determine the rest of the play, as Shakespeare and I would agree.  It is not fate that drives Macbeth to kill Duncan. Instead, the murder is a power-hungry decision that he made to fulfill the prophecy.  (Of course, he couldn't have done it without the assistance of Lady Macbeth, whose persuasive tactics vary from mockery to encouragement).

However, the final decision to kill Duncan was utterly in the hands of Macbeth.  Once that action was complete, there was no turning back, as indicated when he states, "We have scotch'd the snake, not kill'd it," in Act III Scene II.  By saying this, Macbeth declares that there is more that he needs to do to fulfill the prophecy, such as order the murders of Banquo and Fleance in the previous scene of Act III.

As can be seen through these examples from the text, Macbeth's actions are not driven by fate, but by his desire for success and power.  He makes things (mainly murder of people who are in the way of his prophecy) happen himself, without the contribution of a higher power to assist him.




Macbeth will DO anything for his 15 minutes of fame... and can you imagine Miley's actions driven by fate? C'mon- she is in complete control of her (questionable) actions.


http://memecrunch.com/meme/SXOA/macbeth-meme/image.jpg?w=586&c=1

"Adam and Eve"

http://www.metmuseum.org/toah/works-of-art/19.73.1

This piece, entitled "Adam and Eve," was created in 1504 A.D. by the German artist Albrecht Dürer.  He completed it using engraving as his medium, and the work's dimensions are 9 7/8 inches by 7 7/8 inches.

According to the Metropolitan Museum of Art website, Dürer was fascinated by the particular measurements and proportions that make up the human body. Thus, he created Adam and Eve in this work in relation to his theory of human proportions, making their figures perfect in his perspective.


The aspect of the human figures that drew my attention the most was the muscularity of Adam; I mean, clearly, he's ripped in all parts of his body. It is interesting to note that while the woman is also muscular, her figure may not fit today's society's image of the "perfect figure." Dürer draws her with wide hips and small breasts, which are two aspects that are frowned upon in society. However, Adam and Eve have very similar body positions: they both have one leg straight with the other bent, and the same goes for the arms, so maybe Dürer is depicting male and female as somewhat equal. It is fascinating to see a depiction of what the ideal human body looked like during the early 16th century (taking into account Dürer's bias and the concealment of the private parts, of course).
Besides Adam and Eve's bodies, there are other interesting stylistic choices featured in the piece. The choice to only use black and white was mandatory, as he engraved this piece on copper with carving tools, which I find highly impressive. Also, since the work is carved, I would imagine that it would have a very unique texture.
The significance of this piece lies first with the animals included. There is a cat in the area between their feet that represents irritability, while the rabbit behind Eve's right leg is a symbol of peace. The ox in the bottom right represents tranquility, and the elk portrays sadness. These four qualities were considered the "four temperaments" of medieval society (Metropolitan Museum of Art). An innocent man or woman would have a balance of all of these qualities, but when he or she committed a sin, all four characteristics would be prominent at the same time, meaning that he or she would no longer be innocent.
That being said, this piece has a religious connotation. It signifies the biblical story of Adam and Eve and the reasons they were expelled from the Garden of Eden by God. Eve is seen receiving the forbidden fruit from the snake, which she sinfully eats in the story. This action thus eradicated her innocence, and that is why all four of the temperate animals are showed at once.
Dürer made this piece in accordance to typical German art during that time. According to the National Gallery of Art website, as the Protestant Reformation occurred, other European nations were becoming more powerful; Germany, on the other hand, still consisted of smaller independent states connected by the Holy Roman Empire. Therefore, Germany remained dedicated to Christianity during the early 16th century when "Adam and Eve" was created. Dürer thus made this piece considering societal values with the purpose of reminding his peers not to sin and therefore terminate their innocence.
Lastly, here is my sketch(y) rendition of "Adam and Eve." Please note that I have no artistic skills whatsoever. For a laugh, look at how I struggle to draw hands and feet!

http://www.nga.gov/content/ngaweb/features/slideshows/15th-and-early-16th-century-germany.html

http://www.metmuseum.org/collection/the-collection-online/search/336222